soldier breed (tell me if u like it)

BAM the seal exploded on target. Kio slammed 2 more seals on the door beacause it had not compleatly come off. he was in search of the only wepon that could cut through powerful chackra string. the lf kunai.

i want some ideas i got writers block

you wrote two lines... >_<

thats y its called writers block!

yondaime wrote:

thats y its called writers block!

hes got a point
also if u wrote more would help

maybe you should ask for more opinions then maybe you might get soem more ideas i mean for the piece i wrote nobodys even bothered to even check it so yours may even bee better

i checked it out lol before u eventold me to see it

yerr i no was cool of you to do that , i written more now dunnso if i should leave it there or just ask admin to delete it for me

Have you tried acting it out...becoming the character completely and seeing through their eyes?

i would love to read more but keep it up and work hard...no worries we all get stuck but it will come. Just bust a move and see what u can do with it. But u really need to push through because i would love to read more...TheONE out